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Heroes and Villains
by Melanie Anne Phillips
Creator StoryWeaver,
Co-Creator Dramatica
If you are writing with only Heroes and Villains, you are limiting
yourself. Heroes and Villains are actually complex characters each
containing a variety of dramatic elements. But you can rearrange
those elements in different combinations to create far more interesting
and far less stereotypical characters while still accomplishing the
dramatic necessities.
What are these elements? First of all, a Hero is a
Protagonist who is also the Main Character. A
Villain is an Antagonist who is also the Influence Character.
What’s the difference between a Main Character and a Protagonist?
The Main Character represents the audience position in the story. It is
the character the audience most cares about, most empathizes with - the
person the story seems to be "about." In contrast, the
Protagonist is the character who drives the plot forward.
These two functions don’t have to be placed in the same character
as they are in a Hero. In real life, we are not always running the show.
Similarly in stories, the Main Character doesn’t have to always be the
guy leading the charge. Separating the two functions opens up a wide
variety of new audience experiences and creates characters that are less
archetypal and formulaic.
Similarly, when we split a Villain into an Influence Character and an
Antagonist, we open up opportunities, some of which bear directly on the
nature and function of a Love Interest and the structure of a
"Buddy Picture."
First, what is the difference between the Influence Character and the
Antagonist? The Influence Character represents a point of view opposite
that of the Main Character. Every Main Character will be driven by some
central belief system around which the story’s philosophic argument
revolves. This belief system might be an attitude, a way of doing
things, or something as extensive as a specific “world view.” The Influence
Character represents the view that is diametrically opposed.
Over the course of the story, the Influence Character’s impact will
bring the Main Character to a point of decision at which he or she must
choose to stick with the old “tried and true” philosophy/approach or
to adopt the alternative put forth by the Influence Character. In many
stories, this moment results in a “Leap of Faith” in which the Main
Character is forced to make a conscious decision to go with one view or
the other at the critical moment. In other stories, the Main Character
may gradually warm to the Influence Character’s view, but the audience
is not sure if that warmth will hold when the chips are down. Only at
the critical moment will the story demonstrate on which side of the
fence the Main Character drops, not by conscious choice but by
responding from the heart.
When a Hero battles a Villain, both the functional relationship of
the Protagonist/Antagonist battle for supremacy in the plot and the
personal relationship of the Main Character/Influence Character occur
between the same two characters at the same time. In a sense, working
with Heroes and Villains flattens these two relationships into a single
relationship. This often confuses an audience, as they are often not
sure which of the two relationships is being described by a particular
moment between the two characters.
What’s more, it is easy for an author to leave holes in each kind
of relationship because if something happens in one of the two, its
dramatic momentum can carry the attention past a gap in the other. In
fact, it is the foundation of a Melodrama for the audience to accept as
a style that gaps in both relationships are acceptable, as long as the
combined momentum of them both carries the attention on to the next
point in either.
To avoid audience confusion and prevent your drama from
disintegrating into a Melodrama, you may wish to split up either the
Hero, the Villain, or both. When both are split, it allows for a
complete separation of the functional relationship and the personal
relationship, allowing for each to be fully developed by the author and
experienced by the audience.
When only one character is split, the two relationships converge on
the remaining character. So, we might have a story with a Hero (Main
Character/Protagonist) who has a functional relationship with the
Antagonist and a personal relationship with the Influence Character. This
forms a “V” shaped pattern which is referred to as a Dramatica
Triangle.
In another tip, we’ll explore the Dramatic Triangle and how it can
be used to build “Love Interests” and for “Buddy Pictures.”
Copyright Melanie Anne Phillips
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