Writing Tips for
Story Structure & Storytelling
by Melanie Anne Phillips
Creator StoryWeaver,
Co-Creator Dramatica
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Perhaps the best way to instill real feelings in a character is to
stand in his or her shoes and write from the character's point of view.
Unfortunately, this method also holds the greatest danger of undermining
the meaning of a story.
As an example, suppose we have two characters, Joe and Tom, who are
business competitors. Joe hates Tom and Tom hates Joe. We sit down to
write an argument between them. First, we stand in Joe's shoes and speak
vehemently of Tom's transgressions. Then, we stand in Tom's shoes and
pontificate on Joe's aggressions. By adopting the character point of
view, we have constructed an exchange of honest and powerful emotions.
We have also undermined the meaning of our story because Joe and Tom
have come across as being virtually the same.
A story might have a Protagonist and an Antagonist, but between Joe
and Tom, who is who? Each sees himself as the Protagonist and the other
as the Antagonist. If we simply write the argument from each point of
view, the audience has no idea which is REALLY which.
The opposite problem occurs if you stand back from your characters
and assign roles as Protagonist and Antagonist without considering the
characters' points of view. In such a case, the character clearly
establish the story's meaning, but they seem to be "walking
through" the story, hitting the marks, and never really expressing
themselves as actual human beings.
The solution, of course, is to explore both approaches. You need to
know what role each character is to play in the story's overall meaning
- the big picture. But, you also must stand in their shoes and write
with passion to make them human.
The Dramatica software focuses on Story Design, so it provides all
kinds of support in the creation of character roles. Standing in the
characters' shoes is up to you when you actually get down to writing.
Copyright Melanie Anne Phillips
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