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Character
Tips
How
to Create Great Characters!
by
Melanie Anne Phillips
Creator StoryWeaver, Co-creator
Dramatica
Strangely enough, what
makes a character “Great” has little to do with what makes
a character dramatically sound. This is easy enough to see if
you consider the differences between the characters Austin
Powers and James Bond. Both could be seen as Protagonists, and
both could even be seen as heroes, and yet their
personalities, mannerisms, interests, and attitudes are quite
dissimilar. What makes them the same is their dramatic
function; what makes them different are their personalities.
Dramatic function is
part of a story’s logistic structure. Without a function, a
character is little more than window dressing. Yet, even the
most strongly drawn structural character is quite forgettable
without a charismatic personality. Stucturalist writers tend
to start with the function (Antagonist, Protagonist, etc.)
then build a personality on that foundation. Intuitive writers
usually want to get to know their characters first as
individuals, then determine what function they should play in
the structure.
No matter which kind
of writer you are, you will eventually need to develop your
characters’ personalities. So, here’s a great trick to
brainstorm your characters and perhaps even learn something
about your plot along the way.
I call this method,
“Mix and Match.”
More than likely, you
remember a childhood toy that was a book with pictures of
faces, each cut into three pieces: top, middle, and bottom.
The top section of each face had the hair, the middle section
covered the eyes and nose, and the bottom section displayed
the mouth. By flipping parts of each page, you could create
all kinds of different people, swapping the hair of one with
the eyes of another and the mouth of a third.
We can apply a similar
concept to character attributes and physical traits to create
dynamic personalities.
As an example, lets
start with two ordinary, forgettable characters with only
three traits each (Gender, Age, and Role) and mix and match to
create more memorable characters
Character #1:
Male, 38, Mercenary
Character #2:
Female, 9, Shoplifter
Pretty forgettable,
right? Okay, let’s mix and match:
Character #1:
Female, 38, Mercenary
Charcter #2:
Male, 9, Shoplifter
Now think about how
these characters changed their personalities, just by swapping
a single attribute from one to the other. A Male Mercenary,
age 38 simply has a different “feel” than a Female
Mercenary, age 38. Why? Due to our cultural indoctrination.,
we expect certain things of men and certain things of women.
We therefore expect a Male Mercenary to have a different
personality than a Female Mercenary. In other words, it would
require a different personality of woman than a man to become
a Mercenary in our society. So, we (as creative authors) tend
to subconsciously assign those personality traits to the
character, even though we have really only spelled out the
character’s role and gender.
Let’s try another
swap:
Character #1:
Female, 9, Mercenary
Character #2:
Male, 38, Shoplifter
Again, we impose our
own subconscious expectations of each character’s
personality upon him or her so that we have a completely
different feel for each than we did before.
Let’s try one more:
Character #1:
Male, 9, Mercenary
Character #2:
Female, 38, Shoplifter
Once again, the
personalities change.
We might find that one
of these characters strikes our fancy as being interesting to
develop and put into play. But more than likely, we haven’t
found the “Great” character we are looking for. What we
need are more traits and attributes, and more characters to
swap them among.
What I usually do is
list various traits and attributes on 3x5 cards, cut them up
into individual items and then assemble them like the Face
Book to create potential characters for my story.
For example, I might
have a group off different traits/attributes in each of the
following categories:
Name Age Sex Height
Weight I.Q. Hair Color Hair Style Mannerisms (graceful,
clumsy, abrupt, etc.) Physical Impairments Physical
Enhancements (keen eyesight, etc.) Physical Quirks (i.e.
twitch) Religious Affiliations Religious Beliefs (not
necessarily the same as affiliations) Hobbies Skills Talents
Accent Speed of Speech Place of Birth Marital Status Previous
Marriages Special powers Job or Role Pets Siblings (alive and
dead) Personality Traits (sourpuss, practical joker, deadpan
serious, etc.) Sound of Voice (deep, high, breathy)
Well, I could go on an
on with this list, but you get the idea. The best way to
compile a list of categories like this is to read the
newspaper, watch television, or sit in a coffee shop and look
out the window.
Now, in each category,
you need to come up with as many different items as you can.
For example, in the
first category, Name, we might have the usual Joe, and Sally,
but also Zippo, Teaser, Tweezer, and Mulch. The weirder, the
better.
Let’s take our
Female, 9 year old Mercenary and name her Sally. Now how does
her personality change if we name her Tweezer, or Mulch
instead?
In tangible reality,
there is no indicated difference between Sally, the 9 year old
Female Mercenary and Tweezer, the 9 year old Female Mercenary.
And yet, we cannot help but feel they are different because of
our cultural indoctrination.
As a brainstorming
technique for creating “Great” characters, the mix and
match method is the best way I’ve found to break away from
the same old forgettable stereotypes.
Now most of this you’ll
need to do this manually, but in fact there is a place in the
Dramatica Pro software that can help take some of the drudgery
out of it. From the main Dramatica Desktop, click on the
Brainstorming tile. Then, select the Character Generator Tile.
Here you can automatically generate characters by arbitrarily
assigning them names, genders, and structural functions as
archetypes or complex characters.
And speaking of
structural functions, have you noticed that none of the
attributes we assigned to our characters above gave any
indication as to their status as a Protagonist, Antagonist,
other archetype or complex functional character?
If you are a
structuralist writer, you’ll first start with your
Protagonist (or whatever structural function you wish to begin
with) and THEN play the mix and match game on that foundation.
If you are an intuitive writer, you’ll start with mix and
match and then pick one character and determine what function
he, she, or it should play.
Take Tweezer, our
nine-year-old Mercenary. Would she be a better Protagonist or
Antagonist? When you pick a structural function, it ties the
character to the plot and further defines the foundation of
its personality. And, because you have likely chosen a role
for your character, such as Mercenary, the combination of
roles among your characters can actually start to suggest the
outlines of a plot!
Of course, some things
will likely have to be changed to make the characters and plot
more consistent. But, this refining process is just part of
the ongoing development of your story. The real trick is to
break free of the stodgy, ordinary character we create by
falling into our well-worn mental patterns, and mixing and
matching to create arbitrarily intriguing characters.
Copyright ©
Melanie Anne Phillips
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